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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Ohio Investors

United States > Ohio

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$500,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Ohio

* 31-year-old male currently residing in Columbus, OH * Individual investor looking to invest in both start-ups and small businesses seeking growth capital (open to most industries) * Willing to leverage 10-years of Business Development / Corporate Strategy / M&A experience to entrepreneur via advisory-level involvement (open to silent involvement as well) * M.B.A Graduate of The Ohio State Fisher College of Business with concentrations in Finance and Strategy

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > Ohio

With 25 years of experience in finance, I bring a deep understanding of business operations, financial strategy, and capital management. Over my career, I’ve worked with companies of all sizes, from startups to established firms, helping them optimize their financial structure, secure funding, and scale efficiently. My expertise spans financial planning, budgeting, forecasting, and strategic investments. I understand the unique challenges entrepreneurs face and the importance of smart, sustainable growth. As an investor, I’m not just a source of capital—I offer guidance, mentorship, and a network of connections to help businesses thrive. My hands-on approach ensures that I’m actively involved in driving value while allowing entrepreneurs to focus on what they do best. I’m committed to supporting growth, innovation, and long-term success, making me the right partner for your business. Let’s work together to turn your vision into reality.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Ohio

Looking to invest in the future and quality businesses in Ohio more specific to northeast preferred. I am a family man soon expanding to 4 children but still have too much time on my hands. I want to help you grow and hopefully learn something new on your business endeavors. Success is one of my favorite words!

$1,000 to $40,000

United States > Ohio

33yo single father based in Dublin, OH. BS in Finance; MS in Accounting Diverse background in retail operations/project management Most experience in securities with 35% return. Looking to expand and support locally (preferably). Ultimately looking to transition to managing investments full time within the next 5 years. Join me! Not only is investing a passion of mine, but so is elevating others. With that being said, my involvement can be based upon what you/the business demands.

$1,000 to $20,000

United States > Ohio

I am a physician-scientist (M.D., and Ph.D.), with clinical board certifications in anatomic pathology, neuropathology, and clinical informatics. Through clinical informatics, I have become quite proficient in data science, business intelligence, and machine learning, and am hoping to expand these skills to other areas. I am highly proficient in English, Spanish, and Portuguese languages, and have lived throughout the United States and Europe. I am hoping to meet entrepreneurs with great ideas in which I can work with them to bring my background in science, medicine, and data analytics, to help them develop their business as a partnership.

$0 to $25,000

United States > Ohio

As an accomplished business professional in the commercial real estate finance industry, I bring a wealth of experience and expertise to the table. My journey has been shaped by a Master of Business Administration (MBA) degree, which has equipped me with a robust skill set and a strategic mindset. Throughout my career, I have been a catalyst for positive change. I thrive on identifying inefficiencies and streamlining operations. Whether it’s optimizing workflows, implementing cutting-edge technologies, or reengineering business processes, I am committed to enhancing organizational efficiency. Relationships are the cornerstone of success in any industry. I pride myself on fostering strong connections with clients, colleagues, and stakeholders. My ability to cultivate trust, communicate effectively, and collaborate across diverse teams has been instrumental in achieving shared goals.

$1,000 to $20,000

United States > Ohio

I am a married man with one son and I have been in the mortgage industry for over 20 years. I do have a college degree and up to 100K to invest if the right opportunity for me. Depending on the type of investment and/location, I can be either hands-on, advisory and/or silent, but prefer to be silent. My status is as an individual investor. Although my expertise is mortgage loans and real estate, I am open to different ventures if they make sense and the return is worth it.

$5,000 to $100,000