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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Ohio Investors

United States > Ohio

Experienced Senior Manager of Project Management with a demonstrated history of working in the medical device industry. Individual investor.

$10,000 to $40,000

United States > Ohio

I'm a private investor originally from the east coast but relocated to central Ohio about five years ago. I graduated Cum Laude with a degree in Economics from Ohio State University and currently work as a Budget Officer. I've always had a passion for small businesses and startups as I am the son of entrepreneurs that was exposed to the rigorous demands of starting your own business.

$100 to $100,000

United States > Ohio

Investor in Ohio with proven success in many investments. My day job has been focused on business development and new product development in the medical device industry as well as in the oil and gas space. I have led new product development projects for a little under a decade in the medial device space. This included everything from ideation to launching products in complex markets. I have years of experience presenting new concepts to executives and investors. I worked with large 3rd party design firms , engineers, manufacturing groups, etc to make successful products. I've trained sales teams, distribution partners, support teams, and marketers on new products to ensure successful product launches, strong revenue, and bottom line growth. I have closed many successful real estate deals and owned 3 properties before I turned 30 years old. I am looking for the next investment to devote my time and resources to. I am open to a wide range of markets and business models.

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > Ohio

A seasoned investor, having bought and sold more than 20 companies over the last 25 years. Willing to be involved or silent investor.

$10,000 to $500,000

United States > Ohio

Individual investor, married and father of one child, with a bachelor's degree in education and a master's degree in communication, owner of two companies I have more than 10 years in leadership positions in international companies and organizations and I am looking for profitable companies to invest between 5,000 to 100,000 as a silent investor.

$1,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Ohio

Educational background includes electrical and computer engineering and an MBA. Currently a business development professional.

$1 to $1,000,000

United States > Ohio

Restaurant owner in central Ohio looking to diversify.

$1,000 to $20,000

United States > Ohio

I have 12+ years of experience in technology and currently working as Director of Analytics in a fortune 500 companies. I have double masters degree MS and MBA and a Bachelors in Computer Science and immense experience in artificial intelligence, machine learning, voice technology, data analytics with reporting skills and an overall end to end solutions in database or designing front end UI for both web and mobile applications. I would like to invest in tech start ups or Pharma, Bio tech, Real estate, Food industry or pretty much anything as long as you have a good Project Proposal and a confident pitch. I will bring my management and technology skills and guide you to grow your social media presence with marketing and my unique experience in capturing user journey and engagement.

$5,000 to $200,000